Writing my orientation!

In room 12 we are writing our orientations for our narratives this is our success criteria... 
1. use the 7 servants
2. time words
3. adjectives, nouns, verbs
4. capture the reader
5. describe what the characters look and act like


This is my orientation...  
  'Rustle, Rustle!'  "What was that!"  'Rustle, Rustle!'  "There it is again!"  By the way I'm Charlotte Pedley I have blond hair, blue-grey eyes and I'm rather short.  I'm lost in a deep, dark forest right in the middle somewhere.  From left to right, front to back is nothing but darkness and hundreds of trees.  You might be wondering how I got lost, well I was going on a lovely bush walk and it was getting darker and darker, then I turned onto the wrong path and I lost my way.  It became pitch black, and now there's a strange noise coming from that large bush with huge, yellow, glowing eyes behind it... hang on a second... eyes!!!  "Ahhhhhhhhh!!!"