Our learning intention:We are learning to entertain
At the moment we are writing stories about what we think happened before the story of the three little pigs took place. We will also be writing what we think happened after the story was finished, the story from the wolves point of view and lastly we will write an alternate ending for the story.
Here is an exert from a pupils story:
"Grr, what are you doing?" yelled Miss Piggy pant, ripping her pasley pattern apron off. "How many times have I told you, your room looks like a pig sty!" This is what you use to hear if you walked past number 11 Nicker Bocker Lane. Until mamma pig finally snapped! "Thats it! I cant take it any longer, get out of my house, NOW! You little runts out!!" Waahh!" Said Bacon Jr, the plumpest, pinkest pig you will ever see. " Boo!" Yelled Pork Chops. " I'll miss your egg salad sandweidges!" Shouted Ham, the shortest, smartest pig of them all. And they walked away.
Mean while in the forest, Mr Wolfey-Fox was giving his kids the what for too: " You act like you were raised by wolves!!" He screamed. "We were daddy!!" Whimpered Wolf 1.....
How about leaving comments on what you think might have happened before the story of the three little pigs, Room 12 are interested to hear your thoughts!!
1 comment:
very good expression
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